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| hotbabe123 2008-05-07 ch 7,  | abuseluv it but is it the end?!? |
| Tied-Up Dog 2007-10-28 ch 7, | abuseWoot! It's been, like, forever and three writer's names ago since i reviewed... Maybe not thee writer's name, but i'm never constant in anything, especially names... =)) But I like this chapter! --Sef-Diagnosed ADD |
| sugarrose12 2007-06-01 ch 7, | abuseAw...That was cute. The ending seemed a little rushed though. Good job. :) |
| Jessica 2007-05-20 ch 7, anon. | abusei realli like the story its really good how come you didn't continue i would really like to kno wut would happen next |
| Melisa Massacre 2007-04-18 ch 7, | abuseNext! You left me hanging! |
| Melisa Massacre 2007-04-17 ch 5, | abuseyay! |
| Deafgurl's world 2006-06-27 ch 7, | abusehey! Poor Tara. Oh my god. I cant believe its dare. Oh no she is fall in trap into Ryan. Oh no is she fall for him? What if she move away? Anyway hurry up. |
| invisible2all 2006-06-19 ch 7, anon. | abusehey...good chapter but just incase you didnt notice u called tara brooke in a sentenced...looks like u mixed them up a bit |
| unrequitedx 2006-06-16 ch 7, | abuseWoah, he took her to a different restaurant?! OOhh... I see something in the air... I hope the ending wouldn't be too predictable :] Anyhow;; greeaat chapter, I look forward to more updates! :] |
| Lala531 2006-06-09 ch 6, | abuseOMG they kissed update soon |
| unrequitedx 2006-03-27 ch 6, | abuseOh. . .WOW THAT WAS GREAT! I was shocked when it said, "The only thing he could do was cup Tara's face and pull her into a kiss." -> I was like, O.O!! I REALLY LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR UPDATE!! |
| unrequitedx 2006-03-27 ch 5, | abuseWoah. . . I think that's an AWESOME plot, but the ending was a bit odd, she actually decided to go out with him? O.O! Interesting. . . |
| unrequitedx 2006-03-27 ch 4, | abuseO.O! I'm shocked. This is getting better, sadly the next chapter is that last right?! Here's my chance, PLEASE UPDATE SOON FOR CHAPTER 6. I think. o.O or chapter 7 whichever one it is. xD |
| unrequitedx 2006-03-27 ch 3, | abuseI like Tara. She's cool. >:D |
| unrequitedx 2006-03-27 ch 2, | abuseWoah. . . lmao, i wonder what will happen next. . . O.O! |