 leen02x 2004-12-21 . chapter 1thanks for all of the reviews on my page, i really appreciate them! great poem! i like the lines: The wind blows and scratches at my face, But I don’t feel it as it tries to pry my warmth, I have none.
i really wouldn't think of wind scratching. good..umm... personification? (i think that's what it should be). great poem, luv it! |