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| Darkrayne451 2005-04-28 ch 1,  | abuseONce again Bloddy friggin awsome! this was both dayk and calming at the same time and I can relate to it alot. another for my favs! |
| catseyeview 2004-12-20 ch 1, | abuseI love the hope in this and call, also, did you paint the picture posted? if you did, its wonderful. |
| William G. Thorne 2004-12-19 ch 1, | abuseWow, that is all i can possibly say to this... It was wonderful, such a magickal feel. I am Wiccan so This type of stuff really makes me happy. Love it... tell me, how do you get pictures onto your profile page? ~William |
| Keith Andrew 2004-12-09 ch 1, | abusevery cool a modern ode of nature, i like it alot, you did very well with the rhyme, that was very effective, nice work-Keith Andrew |
| black robin 2004-12-06 ch 1, | abuseNice! |
| Moon-Chaser 2004-11-28 ch 1, | abuseVery good, kept the beat and everything.I also liked the fact that you talked of all the elements, that there is a greater power. Keep it up |
| K 2004-11-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseSorry for the typo...meant to say "heal before you hurt." K |
| Manuel Fajar 2004-11-27 ch 1, | abuseA litany that more should chant. m |
| Rhiannon Merdon 2004-11-27 ch 1, | abuseWow. I really like this poem, probably the best one I've read all night. Very pure, and sad... |
| JohnnyGodfather 2004-11-27 ch 1, | abuseWow. I mean, I like, read that, and I just quivered. It was like a religious expirience for me, I swear. I mean, never, in words have I felt so many of my feelings being felt by, like, somebody else. This Was really deep, and moving, and I'd just like to say that you rock. Anyway, you're so good, I'd really appreciate an author like yourself taking the time to read some of my stuff. Peace! |
| scudcrow 2004-11-27 ch 1, | abuseA very beautiful poem. The rythm kept me in check..."So fierce and true...Burn away this hatred...make me anew." I believe a quote from the Bible maintains, "God said venegence is his, learn to love, heal before you heart"--for one takes a moment, the latter takes a lifetime to accomplish. Je l'aime beaucoup! K |