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| scudcrow 2004-12-05 ch 1, | abuseForgive me for saying this: sad account of what must have been a naive approach to reasoning your way through troubled times. However, the poem is well written. I like the fact that the author assumes responsibility whence a commonality in such a poetic style is to blame others! |
| Saeger 2004-11-27 ch 1, | abuseOuch... Dark thoughts there. Well written poem, but... dark topic. |