Reviews for Town held hostage by bloodthirsty WHAT?

Reviews For: Town held hostage by bloodthirsty WHAT?

La. 2006-04-24 ch 1,	I just thought, aside from the terrifying feeling of helplessness and impending doom the town must have felt, maybe the squirrel disabled all the cars so it couldn't be so easily killed by the normal instrument of its kind's deaths. After all, one reviewer asked how you kill a squirrel; cars are the usual answer. Clever evil squirrel.
La. 2006-04-24 ch 2,	This is scary as heck. Ok, as scary as a monster squirrel can be. (When I read that part I seriously thought Apothecary would burst out laughing, but I guess he's too highly trained for that.) I hope the kid's ok. Die, squirrel!!
whothehell'reyou 2005-11-24 ch 1,	The squirrels! They've come to destroy the time-space continuom. Quickly, we must summon the panda ninjas to combat this menace.
Casey Drake 2005-10-02 ch 1,	I just remembered what you said about reviews that seemed like shameless plugs. ok then... the idea of a monster squirrel is funny, but if you don't update, how are we supposed to know whether it is a vampire squirrel, a squirrel of monstrous (or at least abnormal) size, or both? "Monster squirrel" can encompass a wide range of descriptions. It doesn't even have to BE a squirrel, just squirrel-like. :) CD
Casey Drake 2005-10-02 ch 2,	heeheehee... :) CD
Lackeymaster 2005-07-04 ch 1,	I was just waiting for the kid to say something about Chevy being better. Or was it Ford? Would D20 kill Death, too? ;)
TruePoindexter 2005-03-31 ch 1,	Hahaha...I won't review Po8 but I'll review this! Cause...it's...uh...tasteyer? Is that a word? It should be. Pretty entertaining, sweet skill...though a bit of a give a away considering his name.
Liviania 2004-12-28 ch 2,	stares And my sister always said the squirrels would attack. I didn't believe her. Livi
Silent Nemesis 2004-12-04 ch 2,	You're freaking crazy LOL! DISNEY!! LMAO
Masked Critic 2004-11-30 ch 2,	Criminy... IT'S A PIKACHU! AGH! The voice of this story works beautifully; slightly dark, partially comedic, and with a serious tone... Tre magnifique. A very good choice of action if you are experiencing writer's block at all on Po8, writing this is. Good work.
roninke 2004-11-28 ch 2,	Said I wouldn't review it, but here I am.Get your ** in gear and start pushing Po8.
ghenne04 2004-11-28 ch 2,	Once again.. interesting chapter. How exactly do you go about killing a squirrel, anyway? haha.. Well - I can't wait to see how this ends up - keep writing and update soon!
ghenne04 2004-11-28 ch 1,	This is hilarious! It reads like the beginning of a normal story, and a good one at that, and then it turns out it's a monster squirrel! You definitely should continue this - it'd be interesting to see how such a random topic does with such a serious writing style. Nice job - keep writing and update soon!
ONEthousandWORDs 2004-11-28 ch 1,	mae govannen.-I love two things about this specifically. First, the water thing. The way he breaks the car window and all.. and the jugs of water... very awsome. ^_^ Second, I loved the evil horrid monster... and how I could see how, yes, squirrels COULD do that. Very, very awsome. Two thumbs up for this short story thing. ^_^-Only one big question... does the squirrel (or are there many of them?) kill the people?
Cutlass 2004-11-27 ch 1,	Quite an interesting concept to base a story on - quirky and funny, like your last line. ^_^ Overall, you handled the suspense/anticipation very very well. Everything is tense and everything contributes to that tone, the setting, the Apothecary's thoughts, etc. So the last line is anticlimatic and yet sobering, because we all know that the kid is being perfectly serious. For some reason I just kept on thinking of the killer rabbit in Monty Python and the Holy Grail. I like the brisk, military tone in the beginning, but I thought more background information could be given regarding Apothecary, who he works for, the Underground, etc. But then again, maybe you were saving this information for later chapters. shrugs Because I'm a characterization freak, I would've liked to known more about the kid...otherwise, interesting plot-line, and a short, direct, interesting way to start off a story. I'd like to see where this goes...

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