aw...so sweet...

Beautiful translation. I really like this poems. Simple, but very meaningful.

Keep it up.

Very Nice. You can be very expressive in such a small amount of words - I like it alot. Thank you for the review...I'm sorry it's taken me a while to review back I liked the feel in this one - especially the lines 'look at the vaudeville/ in the heart lies/ love love love'

nice translation.i actually understand it now done.