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Reviews For: Ode to the Serving Girl

codyismypup
2005-06-03
ch 1, anon.
abusewow, this made me think, i'd hate to be a waiter!
ParanoiaSerf
2005-04-20
ch 1,
abusewell...that's certainly some food for thought. a view from the other side of the counter. lolz.
PaulAsaran
2005-01-13
ch 1,
abuseI love how this throws those quiet punches at the mean people - or should I say idiots? Nicely written - did you really feel that bad?
Cherub Tattoo
2004-12-06
ch 1,
abuseI know what it's like to work in Customer Service...I used to work at a convenience store. Very observant poem :)
Music To Your Ears
2004-11-28
ch 1,
abuseOh I liked this. It's so true, people think they can walk all over young girls behind the shop counter. I'm soo sorry I didn't review the last chapter for Modern Day Senorita, but it was great as always. I've just finished all my exams so my stress levels have gone way down.

Anywho, this is a really good poem, I get the feeling that the meaning goes deeper than the words.
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