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simpleplan13
2007-07-24
ch 228,
abusegreat metaphor.. beautiful descriptions
J-Kid
2005-11-18
ch 8,
abuseI don't have time to/sit stare read and admire/a master's work now

please forgive the draft/ poor Haiku (rushed) and a first/so glad there's no rhyme.-(heh. chuck it. But I'll be back to finish the rest of your poems. Eventually.)

really like your verse"Serendipity,Magic in a chance event,—That is what love does."
Nobody-n-Particular
2005-06-07
ch 28,
abuseAh, defeats censorship and proclaims victory for the writer's quest.
Nobody-n-Particular
2005-06-07
ch 27,
abuseFun experimenting of formatting.
Nobody-n-Particular
2005-06-07
ch 25,
abuseWhat fascinating formatting. Reminds me of my kitten.
Nobody-n-Particular
2005-06-07
ch 24,
abuseI love that, "dewdrops on yellow"
NumblesTheAuthor
2005-05-31
ch 163,
abusethis is interesting, how you use the way others inspire you in a very direct way.. nicely done!
pneumothorax
2005-05-28
ch 163,
abuseVery good.

"Just a bit of snow,—Seems to interfere with life,¿Where is beauty’s glow?"

Saddening line this one seemed. Interesting idea, although I don't necessarily agree.
Nobody-n-Particular
2005-05-08
ch 23,
abuseHow I love winter.
Nobody-n-Particular
2005-05-08
ch 22,
abuseI enjoy your author notes, they are often as lovely and poetic as the poem itself.
Nobody-n-Particular
2005-05-08
ch 13,
abuseToo bad life is so short. Maybe not so sweet, If it were long.

-Makes one wonder in their idealistic wishes to live forever. Or when the child exclaims "I could never die!" Should I even wish for a thousand years, or be satisfied with a couple? Would the enchantments of a time wellspent be muddled through the every day?
Nobody-n-Particular
2005-05-08
ch 12,
abuseVery sincere, endearing.
Nobody-n-Particular
2005-05-08
ch 11,
abuseHm, fun. :)
Nobody-n-Particular
2005-05-08
ch 10,
abuseI like this, lovely, smoky imagery
Nobody-n-Particular
2005-05-08
ch 9,
abuseBrown hair feels like down, Fluffs and whirls on head softly, Then tousles around.

- So very lighthearted, brought a smile to my face

Magical Hula, Wansome dance sings songs to life— ¿Can your hands speak truth?

- Your writing often seems to evoke that, (what do they call it?) magic realism of sorts. Very nice.
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