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| simpleplan13 2007-07-24 ch 228,  | abusegreat metaphor.. beautiful descriptions |
| J-Kid 2005-11-18 ch 8, | abuseI don't have time to/sit stare read and admire/a master's work now please forgive the draft/ poor Haiku (rushed) and a first/so glad there's no rhyme.-(heh. chuck it. But I'll be back to finish the rest of your poems. Eventually.) really like your verse"Serendipity,Magic in a chance event,—That is what love does." |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-06-07 ch 28, | abuseAh, defeats censorship and proclaims victory for the writer's quest. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-06-07 ch 27, | abuseFun experimenting of formatting. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-06-07 ch 25, | abuseWhat fascinating formatting. Reminds me of my kitten. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-06-07 ch 24, | abuseI love that, "dewdrops on yellow" |
| NumblesTheAuthor 2005-05-31 ch 163, | abusethis is interesting, how you use the way others inspire you in a very direct way.. nicely done! |
| pneumothorax 2005-05-28 ch 163, | abuseVery good. "Just a bit of snow,—Seems to interfere with life,¿Where is beauty’s glow?" Saddening line this one seemed. Interesting idea, although I don't necessarily agree. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-08 ch 23, | abuseHow I love winter. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-08 ch 22, | abuseI enjoy your author notes, they are often as lovely and poetic as the poem itself. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-08 ch 13, | abuseToo bad life is so short. Maybe not so sweet, If it were long. -Makes one wonder in their idealistic wishes to live forever. Or when the child exclaims "I could never die!" Should I even wish for a thousand years, or be satisfied with a couple? Would the enchantments of a time wellspent be muddled through the every day? |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-08 ch 12, | abuseVery sincere, endearing. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-08 ch 11, | abuseHm, fun. :) |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-08 ch 10, | abuseI like this, lovely, smoky imagery |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-08 ch 9, | abuseBrown hair feels like down, Fluffs and whirls on head softly, Then tousles around. - So very lighthearted, brought a smile to my face Magical Hula, Wansome dance sings songs to life— ¿Can your hands speak truth? - Your writing often seems to evoke that, (what do they call it?) magic realism of sorts. Very nice. |