great metaphor.. beautiful descriptions

I don't have time to/sit stare read and admire/a master's work now

please forgive the draft/ poor Haiku (rushed) and a first/so glad there's no rhyme.-(heh. chuck it. But I'll be back to finish the rest of your poems. Eventually.)

really like your verse"Serendipity,Magic in a chance event,—That is what love does."

Ah, defeats censorship and proclaims victory for the writer's quest.

Fun experimenting of formatting.

What fascinating formatting. Reminds me of my kitten.

I love that, "dewdrops on yellow"

this is interesting, how you use the way others inspire you in a very direct way.. nicely done!

Very good.

"Just a bit of snow,—Seems to interfere with life,¿Where is beauty’s glow?"

Saddening line this one seemed. Interesting idea, although I don't necessarily agree.

How I love winter.

I enjoy your author notes, they are often as lovely and poetic as the poem itself.

Too bad life is so short. Maybe not so sweet, If it were long.

-Makes one wonder in their idealistic wishes to live forever. Or when the child exclaims "I could never die!" Should I even wish for a thousand years, or be satisfied with a couple? Would the enchantments of a time wellspent be muddled through the every day?

Very sincere, endearing.

Hm, fun. :)

I like this, lovely, smoky imagery

Brown hair feels like down, Fluffs and whirls on head softly, Then tousles around.

- So very lighthearted, brought a smile to my face

Magical Hula, Wansome dance sings songs to life— ¿Can your hands speak truth?

- Your writing often seems to evoke that, (what do they call it?) magic realism of sorts. Very nice.