Wow.. another incredible poem! I especiallhy likes "His eyes would have a harried look,/That of one whose soul was sold." It says so much.. and the soul part.. its soemthing I wouldnt have even thought of.. it was so cool!

"As his daunting ghost still stalks them" I really like this line! There may be a few words you could omit to make it flow better, or just reword some of it. Though I think this is good, and you definitely have talent. Keep up the writing, my friend. And by the way, I LOVE your username. ~Karma Chameleon

Wow again. I like how you brought back 'round "his death upon them weighs" in the last line.