Wow, I really liked that. Im not sure if you knew.. but the raven is tied to the celtic goddes (Morrigan) of war, and so I thought that was pretty nifty. Actually - yeah I really liked it. *nod* Yeah!

O that is good, isn't it? (RETORICAL QUESTIONS ROXXORZ SOXXORZ!) I just love the subtlety of ryhme and meaning. THe raven could represent so many things, as can the battle. Maybe if the raven did something surprising, something that gives meaning. I cant think of much critiqe for you, sorry. Great job!

Whoa. That is amazing.

Great poem. You have a talent for writing that I can only envy and hope for. Awesome rhyming.