I'm not a fan of poetry, but this was pretty good. You've reviewed my stories, so I felt it is my duty to review yours. well, keep writing

Nice job. It was a lil bumpy here and there, but overall it was pretty cool! it showed how much you like this... ahem "crush" of yours.

it was nearly like bringing us thru a journey. the first part being when you first fell in love with him, then slowly how you liked him in all his beauty.

you then slowly and subtly told us that you and him are not together, and he has another girl. you know its not quite possible, yet you still like him.

such simple language used, yet it was a wonderful poem-journey i went thru. good job!

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