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| amber-skies 2007-05-30 ch 9, | abusewoah, this is really good, only thing, it's a bit confusing who is who though maybe i should have read it with no distractions around - i wasn't concentrating properly. I think you maybe should have explained who the different people are. Also, Fleur kissing kenny - that's a bit odd seeing as she didn't really know he liked her, did she? |
| ErgoSchmergo 2005-02-09 ch 3, | abuseoohh i like this story. can't wait to see where you take it. a few typos, but those can't be helped. keep up the good work |
| sungirlth 2005-02-09 ch 2, anon. | abuseHollz darl oo its gettin gud but who woz keiths visitor from chapter 2 ? lv ya darl x x |
| haylz 2004-12-10 ch 2, anon. | abusehiya darlin cool new chapter i wish our real holderness high woz lke this love ya darl c u on mon x x x hug x x x ps just bin to pub with kez and klee after da panto lol |
| sungirlth 2004-11-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseHiay hollz its hayl great story but wen am i gonna b init lol i wonder who mrs smith is lololol. luv ya darl xx x |