Very good. This poem spoke to me, probably since I'm always down all the time. It is wonderfully written and the artistic talent that you have is just mindblowing. Very good job. Kudos to you! See ya!

i applaud you. ::applauds:: damn translators kept giving me different answers for the title, but i think i know which one was correct after having read this. ah, family. i try and avoid talking about them directly in my poems...i'd get writer's block. kind of like too many people trying to push through the same doorway. nothing gets through.

I LOVE IT! Gr8 job! Keep up the good work!

wow.. that's really impactful and vivid. Saying that "I love it" though would seem a bit cruel to the poem though. So I guess to properly say I like would be, I hate it. So I hate it. Very, very much. =)