very boring. i read 3 sentences. blech i h8 school. -sigh- dont take this offensively. :( but i do h8 school

kisses,Luna

I'm sorry, but I just couldn't get past the second sentence. Not for lack of trying mind you. Your vocabulary here seems too forced and out of place. Very archaic, very dense,a nd absolutely boring.

The imagery was good! I liked this! ^_^ Keep it up!

Reading eh? That's near where I live. And I to Dorset every year to go to the Dorset Steam fair. It's very cool.Cool Story.