This is an amazing piece of work. On the surface it's just a story about a repeated one night stand, but if you sit and think about it more, you can draw all sorts of meaning from it. I love stories like that. Wonderful work.

I really liked this. You know when to zone in on the details, and when to pan out to the more general things. I really felt the emotion of both of the characters, and it's intriguing to me, this anonymous (yet intimate) relationship. Great job again.

This was realy good. I love the way you go into detail and the way you describe your emotions. This was a great original story!

I'm not rilly sher what to call this story, but it is varry good. There probly mistakes but I couldn't fined enny of them.

Awesome, I really liked it. Thanks for reviewing my story.