Hey that was really good! Very interesting.

Hey, I really love how the rhyming here isn't forced at all -it's like someone is actually saying it. I like the concept. Yay for you! Props! Kudos! Etc.!

o, love the ending. very good, and very strong, poem. wonderful job

incredible. purely incredible. i want to read it again, but i know if i do i'll cry... very powerful, very well spoken... wow.