this was great. keep up the good work and writing. i can not wait for more.

OMG i love the first chapter idk if ur still writing but please please PLEASE continue!

Great Beginning descriptions are really good although I would have gone into detail about the restaurant but then again it isn't her date so she doesn't need to go into full fledge detail anyway good story please update

this is Fu*ckin hilarious... please update... i gotta read some more.. lol...

Are you ever going to update? o.o

Oh daddy been naughty )

This seems like a good story, how bout you update?

and yeah add me to aol if you want

This was a good chapter! I like the story line you've got set up. Could be the start of a good story!

i luv it write more