Well, I was scrolling down my "Review History" and saw that THIS story in particular, which I had reviewed a while back, was updated. And, the final judment is... Well, I sure wish I had some extra hands to give this story elevendy-billion thumbs up. Come on Ed the Roach, cut out being such a good author so that I can have a fighting chance around he'ah.

Dont let benny kill himself I was so scared for him. I love the tension. Only issue I have with it is that you've got less and less description as the story goes. I would love to hear more about what amy and his mother look like. But thats an artistic choice I respect. Sorry I've been away personal issues and stuff.

I'm wrapt keep up the good work.

Hey... this stuff is like crack. You get addicted to it, but it has none of the negative repercussions of crack... NG! (Scratches chest and neck) I have to go now.

Wow. I really wasnt expecting that. Why is the sad boy so hyper. Exhilaration at something new, drugs, what? Ahh I can't contain my curiosity. I got more of Greg and Benny too. My only critism is the skipping of how long he was watching him. Its hard to get a feeling of time scale although you implicate its been a while.

I love this story its so sad and kind of creepy. While you probably have a twist in mind you still manage to keep the characters firmly grounded. I'd like to see more of the room mates different personalities but I'm sure you will. Oh and one more personal note, as someone whose parents fought all the time when small, the little boy is really wonderfully real. Even though the parents aren't really fighting and it is probably something else all together frightening. ^^