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silvermoonsparkling 2005-12-04 . chapter 6
I can't believe you only have 1 review for this!Your story is amazing, the characters you create are very real and the storylines moving. I haven't had chance to finish reading yet but have printed out the rest (hope you don't mind - I printed the copyright part too just in case lol) I think this might overtake the current book I'm reading :SAnyway, really really love the story so far.~XAmyX~
goochflex 2005-02-18 . chapter 6
Good Story! I really enjoyed reading it. Absolutely enjoyed reading it. It only took me a few days to finish it off, mainly because I am way to busy as a person. Anyway, you wrote perfect characters. I mean they were so realistic. The shower scene with Ethan was so well written I actually felt hungover. I liked all the characters especially the ones I was supposed not to like. Like Johnny. He reminded me of the average frat guy and that is what I thought you wanted to accomplish, so bravo. One thing though. The gun situation, what type of gun was it. Johnny calls it a street sweeper (a pump action revolving shotgun) but everyone else calls it a machine gun. I didn't understand if there were more than two guns or if there was a shotgun and a machine gun. I didn't agree at first with how everyone died so quickly. Maybe because I liked the characters so much but I see how you pulled it together. Anyway, great job and I am looking forward to reading more of your work.Gooch
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