Excellant poem alex it really is as always you speak from the heart and the description is amazing. Your writing has definately come a long way

Beautiful. Nice piece of work. very touching,-Rae

omg, that was so sad, i know exactly how you feel.

i loved it. i can relate to this one a lot. i was going to write one like this, just never got around to it. lol. but this was very good. your talented at getting your feelings and thoughts across in a small poem.

good. you can see what is going on and understand the feeling that no one can see how much you're hurting even though you don't really hide it.

Amazing alex, this is excellently writte, very well done_love you Keith Andrew

OMG that's so what it's like. My god. This is so good. Wow. You just captured it so well. OMG. I almost cried. GREAT JOB.

good.i really liked it.