Wow, I liked it from that perpective.

beautiful...

oh my gosh this is so good your writting actually makes me cry because i know how it feels, please keep writting this is the first that something written has made me cry. good no great job. lcb

Well, evenly enough. I liked it. The TV part threw me, but everything else mixed with the hate and regret, if any, and mostly the sorrow. A clear picture of how suicide doesn't take just your soul, but everyone elses, too.

Simple, but very powerful.A very well written poem.

~ColdFrost

Whoa, very well done, such a delicate subject treated with care and sympathy. This is excellent. I'm in awe-Keith Andrew

Keep up the hard work, waiting for more

Wow, this is how I feel sometimes, what I think about. I loved it, intense but still good. I love the last part the most.

Keept it up.

That was intense enough. And very characteristic. Well done, the ending had a line to it...

sad, but very well written and thought provoking. very nice work. keep it up. -silent rain ^_^

that was bloody brilliant. I liked it.Write more soon.

nice! very good. and yes, i was comparing myself to the poor little ragdoll.

omg this is so sad but a great poem...you have a amazing gift...

OH MY GOD. Last year my friend committed suicide. This just...OMG I'm crying now. He was...God. I love this poem. It just...speaks to me...Wow. Thank you.

ahh, that was sad but had a really great flow and i loved the whole content of this poem, its one of the best i have ever read