I enjoyed this. Keep up the good work.

hello! seems like you haven't updated this in a long time!! well i read this story and i thought it was pretty interesting so it'd be cool if you updated?hopefully you do update it and ill get a chance too see what happens=P

This is a review in response to realism. You think ab-angel will be a coward and erase your review? Well I see a bigger coward in one who submits a review anonymously! I'm sorry I haven't read your story yet angel but I can't stand to see someone give unconstructive critism! I think that realism should just wake up and face reality! Fangirls and fanboys will exist and will never go away! You can't change the world to think like you do. There's an old saying "Be the change that you want in the world". I'd hate to see realism do that. This would make my third review trying to correct anonymous reviewers on how to write a good constructive review. And you know what? I dare them to review my stories. About your story though Angel, I'll read it when I'm not on a fifteen minute station at the city library ^_-

You keep switching perspectives from first person to third person omnipresence. It'd be a good idea to choose one and stick with it.

I'm sorry, but I don't feel the mood for this story. and you know what? I hate yukiru sugisaki, he's a suckie manga artist. sure, he draws beautiful girls and the guys are so cool, but seriously its disgusting, I think its a waste of time reading a manga where its always girls thinking the guys are cool, and then they look gay and so on. that's not the whole point of manga. and cardcaptor sakura? give me a break, this is waht I have been hearing my whole life, syaoran is so kawaii! he's mine! its so pathetically disgusting. why dont u watch manga and anime that's at least excellent and makes sense at the same time. I'm so sick of animes and manga with girls that have big chest and short meeny skirts. life isnt always about that! and I'm so sick of girl's keep saying sora is mine! dammit he's a game character, not for screwing. why don't you at leaST talk about something usefull?, and your story sucks big time!

P.S. if you try to erase this flame, that means ur a coward. u cant even bear to leave one flame. be glad i wrote it especially for you.

yukiru sugisaki sucks man

Again, very cool. ^^ Love the part with the teacher. I wish I had the gall to confront my teacher's when they were being hypocrites. XD Keep up the awesome work!!

Sorry about the lateness of my return. My schedule got majorly messed up. V.V

Anyway, this chapter was too cute! Yota reminds me so much of my own little brother's, and my nephew. ^^~ He's adorable. Great job and keep up the good work. ^.~

nice story! ^-^ update soon

Hey, it's nice to see that you updated. The plot is good, but you should start descibing things a little more to help show more feeling into this story. Other than that, keep up the good work!

Woo! I finally got some extra time, sorry it's taken so long. ^^;;Good job so far, the 1st chapter was quite awesome, and I'm looking forward to more. I don't think I ahve to tell you that this is on my Favorites list and is staying for good. ^.~ Keep up the good work, this is just awesome!

Hey, this is cool! Sora finally has a friend! :-)

Anyway...I didn't know you liked "Cardcaptor Sakura"! (Sorry, I was just looking at your list of favorite anime and manga...) Ooh, and Li is your favorite character! He's mine too! B-)

thats very good. you have a nice first chapter there. keep it up.

Wow, it's really great. I'd love to read the next chapter, and hopefully all of them, too! ^_^