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| Living in a story called li... 2005-03-19 ch 1,  | abuseLi naa! |
| poetic abortion 2004-12-05 ch 1, | abuseI have yet to learn Japenese for every day use. ::Worships you.:: n-n Sorry I'm feeling silly. @__@ I like this. Very much soo. Very well written and just gorgouse ! Thankyou so much for writing this ! ;_; ~ Noelle ~ |
| Ultimate Schuyler 2004-12-01 ch 1, | abuse^^ Sugoi! Arigatou for the translation. ^^ I learned a new verb! Agarimasu! Sweet... I liked it! I completely understood the first two lines. I've been studying Japanese all by myself for almost a year, and compared to what I did early on, this is fantastic. The only problem would be that "agarimasu" is NOT the past tense. That would be "agarimashita". But you can leave it like that and it means "appears" or "will appear". Also if this was a sentence (I've noticed many of the actual, old Japanese haikus are really sentences) you need a particle... but it's AWESOME for a first one! You have lots of talent. ^^ I hope to see lots of these in the future! U_U Sometimes I feel like I'm the only one posting them up! |
| scudcrow 2004-11-29 ch 1, | abuseJust as your first, I see the beauty in one too. Seems like somewhere, a night breeze is witness to both! |