I love the evening, you have captured the senernity and harmony of it in your poem. Very good job, you have great potential. Merry part.

Well done. It's a subject so obvious that it's surprising that others haven't written a poem on this before. Of course, that's what talented people do - see what others can not. Thanks for posting.

Lowell

this is so magical...i love it!

Your summary really made me wanna read this and you didn't disappoint. The thought of a night ballet is kinda romantic and serene. You can almost hear the noises, because everyone has at sometime. It's a nice, peaceful, elegant picture. Good job. Only thing detracting from it is the words that run together in the 2nd line.

beautiful imagery...

Beautiful. I love the idea of a night ballet. Its so stirring to my mind and creates such a beautiful picture.Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.