i just left a review on ur other poem... sorry bout that it kinda left me speechless. no this one tho, unfortunatley for you. really good imagery. nice.

... geez...

I'm kind of incoherent here, you know?

Well... your diction is flawless - I can't help but admire your use of words. Your descriptions are absolutely beautiful, and so very, very vivid. Just... argh, I can't stop reading it. I could never say how much I love this poem. Perfection. I hold this in high regards - amazing poem.

beautifulbeautifulBEAUTIFULperiod. lovely work. -kismet.

Wonderfulness.Absolute beauty and grace.

Izzy J.

1. I suck in all suckiest ways for not returning your reviews sooner. i SUCK.2. Hi :)`Wow, this is defnitely one of your prettiest poems. Just the images the first two lines conjured were so vivd to last throughout the extent of the poem: "A shroud of amethyst and cobalt falls; /At the distant dawn night sounds retreat,"I reckon, that one should be allowed, and be able, to hate someone (forever) - wouldn't that just be so much easier?Heh. Lovely work here chica, fantabulous! Kudos!

well she and you rock ;cause this poem is amazing

E - I love this poem, Mia! Sorry I didn't review it earlier. *drops down dead from exhaustion* Ugh.. one week off of school and work, and I forgot how tiring it all is. Anyway... this is absolutely beautiful.. it's so heartwrenching and I love it because it's just such... a straight-from-the-heart love poem, all dramatic and speaking of the kind of love that would last through this lifetime and the next five... yay! :) And YAY FOR SARAH HAVING A BOYFRIEND... haha oh wait.. that's me. :P love you, chica!! So glad to see you wrote something.. and something so damn beautiful!!