Alright! I like this one a lot. The style is a lot like a friend of mine from Xanga, and I must say, I love poems like this ;P I was particularly fond of the metaphor for suicide where you said "...and commits her last eternal sin." That's tight, keep it up maddame.

Very well written and expressive. The way you repeated 'tears' and how it was like prgressive stages and each 'tears' seems to be gaining in power...

Stones decay, words last Nick

Wow. I loved the way you kept this in perspective; the way you always tied it back into the idea of the tears. But it seemed to me, that each time you started off "Tears", those tears were for a different purpose than the ones before it. Maybe it's just me XD Keep it up!Kon-Kavrae

beautiful, and so