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Reviews For: Book of Whispers: The Next Tale

Andaren
2004-11-30
ch 3,
abuseExcellent, as always :D I don't have much to say, other than I loved this chapter.

Blessed Be,

Andaren x
Andaren
2004-11-30
ch 2,
abuseAnother good chapter, your descriptive writing is truly amazing. The imagary is very clear and sharp, enhancing a magical storyline :)

I love your characters, especialy Listhan ... I actually thought the ritual thing had happened to him - I completely forgot that he was dreaming until he woke up, I thought that part was really cleverly written.

Onto the next chapter for me, I think ;)

Blessed Be,

Andaren x
Andaren
2004-11-30
ch 1,
abuseI loved the way you built atmosphere :) There are no serious mistakes here, a fantastic beginning to a story.

I'll read on,

Blessed Be,

Andaren x
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