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| Andaren 2004-11-30 ch 3, | abuseExcellent, as always :D I don't have much to say, other than I loved this chapter. Blessed Be, Andaren x |
| Andaren 2004-11-30 ch 2, | abuseAnother good chapter, your descriptive writing is truly amazing. The imagary is very clear and sharp, enhancing a magical storyline :) I love your characters, especialy Listhan ... I actually thought the ritual thing had happened to him - I completely forgot that he was dreaming until he woke up, I thought that part was really cleverly written. Onto the next chapter for me, I think ;) Blessed Be, Andaren x |
| Andaren 2004-11-30 ch 1, | abuseI loved the way you built atmosphere :) There are no serious mistakes here, a fantastic beginning to a story. I'll read on, Blessed Be, Andaren x |