Gawd that's really, really sad. Gripping. NICE-O.

Thanks for reviewing.

-Shelby

oh my! this is so much emotion in those words! this is why i love short poems! I love this. This is beautiful! and yet sad...good job!~Nicole

this is good! i like it. sorry i havent reviewed in awhile, was super busy i got time to read now tho ;)

That's so sad- but wonderfully put.

this is sad...but its a good poem..i hope to read more from you...and thank you for your mention of me in your bio. Keep writing.

Death-By-Papercut(formerly CatSlayer)

this invokes some very powerful feelings and I think you handled them very well here. Your langauge choice is superb.

A little desperate I think...but I like this poem :)Bye.