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| jfchua_shobe 2005-05-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow! Lalim ha... Well, Its good! |
| stariel 2004-12-19 ch 1,  | abusegod. i think this is great! ur poetry is fantastic! gosh. keep going =] |
| Anarkali 2004-12-03 ch 1, | abuse=)7 reviews already!! which means u definitely should write more. (as in, more poems). Maybe you could make it a collection of love poems or something. Gud job!! |
| Ahemait 2004-12-02 ch 1, | abusehi, you read one of my stories (the sadist) and asked to to review yours. sorry, but i don't like lovey things. this is still good though, sounds a bit like romeo and juilet except ya know...not. |
| Cel Leonardo 2004-12-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really like the poem... I think the author is really in love to someone... keep up the good work... write more poems... |
| Ivy Ether 2004-12-01 ch 1, | abuseOh...chilly. Sad, too. I really like the description used. It sounds like the guy really loved the girl. Why he'd kill her, I dunno...But I definitely liked this. Really good for first time at poetry :) |
| Nickel 2004-11-30 ch 1, anon. | abusewow i dont know how to explain why i love this poem so much, im not sure why, but it is very good. write more! |
| Aimee Raven 2004-11-30 ch 1, | abuseWow! Well I adore the story behind this, and the end definitely rocks. There are a few cliché lines, but the poem is still splendid, especially if it's your first. I truly loved the lines 'You stared deeply at my eyesAnd caressed my face my undying loveAs you said you’ll forgive me and forget' Write more! |
| PrincessSelphie 2004-11-30 ch 1, | abusewow this is like something from a greek myth or a shakespearean tragedy. nice one! really moving |
| keltica 2004-11-30 ch 1, | abuseHello, well I broke up with my girlfriend yesterday, we still loved each other, but I'm in another country for university studies so I hardly ever see her ... well, very good poem, and I liked it a lot ... keltica, the celtic fire |