 Tzotel431 2005-11-11 . chapter 1That is sad, i hope you actually find some real good love.
~Tzotel |
 dancingintherain 2005-02-16 . chapter 1very very cute! |
 D L Dzioba 2005-01-30 . chapter 1Aw Sad ;_; I like it its very simplistic |
 THROUGHTHESEEYES 2005-01-24 . chapter 1Things that need to be expressed clearly- that's what you do in everyone of your poems. I particularly liked this one as one of my friends experienced this. I'm sending your site to her. Keep on writing! |
 AllyCred 2004-12-13 . chapter 1this was like said with so much honesty and i have to say i loved it, i know how you feel, in many ways.lots of love ~AllyCred~ |
 Keith Andrew 2004-12-09 . chapter 1God this is sad. I know what that feels like. Maybe the thief gave it to someone else, you never know. God i know my hearty has shown up in a few weird places-Keith Andrew |
 shehna 2004-12-07 . chapter 1 Excellent once more, you've really got a tact for this sort of stuff |
 myno 2004-12-06 . chapter 1It sounds a bit raw somehow, but the format is interesting, especially the end. |
 asha lie lee 2004-12-03 . chapter 1very touching. i loved it, and especially since i can really relate cause im in that situation right now. good job. i really liked how you were asking and not demanding at the end for them to let you go.-ace |
 NOREEN BI 2004-12-01 . chapter 1 a poem that truly comes from the heart.well expressed. |
 Codge 2004-11-30 . chapter 1Pretty good! Have a look at Digw's story, it is really good! |
 lady of the demented hamsters 2004-11-30 . chapter 1Wow that was really good.I liked it.Your poetry was well good.Write more poetry soon |