o. nice. The line breaks come in at the perfect times. Really i think this poem was very thought provoking...we've all been there. sorry for the sucky review of the great poem! ~Mariah

love the little hurt girl theme...so cute

Wow. I can't find words for that one. Every guy at my school thinks they can be the one to get away with that kindof thing with me. They're very wrong, and usually end up getting very hurt. But I like the sort of sarcastic difiance tone of it.

Nice idea, well portrayed. x

Very nice job! Like the ending,and everything seemed to fit together nicely, Great job!

X-Zai

comepletely awesome! you did a terrific job of describing how people can deny that you are really hurting, and not just trying to get attention.

~leila*

That's good, playing of the stereotype girls are weak. Nice little way for a rose to prick....Was it just me or did that sound kinda... cliche?~!

Oh My Goodness...i love love love this poem, true to me too...very touching ... i even read it to my mom...she did the normal aw thing but she felt it too...definately a favorite of mine.

True and touching.

Very cliched if I do say so. Definently one of my favs. ~_^

this was excellent i loved the flow and the style was brilliant the whole content was spot on. lots of love ~AllyCred~

Oh, wow. That was powerful. -adds to favs- Oh, wow... that's really all I can say. The emotion was amazing... the way you broke the lines up (that probably has a name, but I don't pay attention in English class so I wouldn't know, lol) and I just... liked it. Good work! :D :D :D :D P.S. I LOVE your name!

powerful. Strong emotions just jump at you from this poem hurt, pain, anger. This poem has the theme down to a tee. And nicely written i have to say-Keith Andrew

a broken heart never heals...very good comparisons...keep up the good work

I love this piece. Your comparison to a hurt little girl cutting her knee was fantastic. Keep it up