Very Nice!

Short but good. Enough said.

aw...your on awesome poet...keep writing, babe!

I liked this on here. Short, yet well written. Very nice.

That's really sad. I can identify myself with your poem quite well. Well done.

Short and sweet. I especially liked the last two lines. ~ WB ~

This is what you would call, pure genius. Continue writing and I will always read, because your stuff is good.

True- very true. I would pick out favorite lines, but it's all my favorite. good job

i really liked this coz i know exactly how you feel. you said it well in the short space loved it. lots of love ~AllyCred~

ah yes the dreaded fake smile, i have to admit that i at one stage became one of its many practitionars and i have to say that i agree with what youre saying here. Nicely done-Keith Andrew

Ah, this is one of your best, I really like it. Short, to the point, and so... complete, i don't know.

exelent poem...wish i could b as good at fake smiles as u

very well written i have a piece very similar that i haven't put up yet. same context you should read it. (i'll put it up)

the idea is great and i love the line "increase my wrinkles", however the repetition of smile is...akward...it would be more powerful if you only used it at the end. thanks for reviewing! and keep writing too!

Some people need to become the masters of fake smiles from many reasons. I get the feeling that many people can relate to this poem.

Short but full of meaning.

Keep it up.