Great poem. I like the title. Have a nice day.

Twilight Starr

nice work. keep writin

Thanks for the review! I like this poem, it's very thoughtful. I like the vocabulary you chose. Awesome!

this piece sound beautiful to the ear. I don't quite get what you may be talking about, but I like it nonetheless.

Felecia

One of your best, I think. Really wonderful job on this; it's short but so powerful and entrancing. You end it perfectly (reminds me of Phantom of the Opera). Anyway, this is surely going on my fav. list.

Confusing, and yet entrancing. I'm not sure I get it, but it amazes me nonetheless. I absolutely love it but I don't know why.

That's so . . *for want of a better word* beautiful. The wording, the flow, just, everything. This sounds weird, but it reminds me of a painting. Anyway, I loved it.