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| Krissman 2005-02-16 ch 1,  | abusei c u as a teen writer...well for teens i mean, like an rl stine, or pullman or sumthing, i tihnk u got sumthing for the fantasy story thing, im working on mine...though ppl say i could be the next steven king with sum of the things i write(not posted) but i still am not pleased...gj |
| Fire Djinn 2005-01-28 ch 4, | abuseVery interesting. I like your characters! thanks for reviewing The Child of Faerie! |
| Learah Kaelar 2005-01-28 ch 3, | abuseHey, you haven't updated in a while! What's going on? Please hurry. Blessed Be! |
| Rose of Granuaile 2005-01-09 ch 4, | abuseAH! You need to update! I need more story! This is really good so far, update soon!~Hip |
| Rose of Granuaile 2005-01-09 ch 3, | abuseoo, Merrick sounds like trouble...lol. I'm really enjoying this, can't wait to read the next chapter! You are officially on my favie authors list! You should feel special!~Hip |
| Hip 2005-01-09 ch 2, anon. | abuseAH! Cliffhanger! I must read the next chapter! BTW what does this have to do with Ty and Micheal?~Hip |
| Hip 2005-01-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseoo, nice start, can't wait to read what happens next!~Hip |
| Urban Cinderella 2004-12-29 ch 1, | abuseI love this even more than your poems- your style is beautiful. The imagery puts me right in the story, and the scene is beautifully laid out. :) Lots of talent around here. ;) |
| Learah Kaelar 2004-12-21 ch 4, | abuseHooray! You updated! Sono molto happy!(stupid italien teacher hasn't even taught us to say 'happy' yet. Idiot) Anyway, I LOVE IT so far. Though the friendly old man says 'my' alot...a bit possesive, isn't he? Keep going, I can't wait for the next one. |
| Miscellaneous 2004-12-20 ch 4, | abuseThe story itself is quite good. The only suggestion I have thus far is that you might want to do a quick grammar check on your chapters before you upload them, because there are a few typos. Other than that, keep it up! |
| Miscellaneous 2004-12-19 ch 2, | abuseVery well-written and to the point, and still interesting. I'm jealous. Let me know when you update. |
| Learah Kaelar 2004-12-08 ch 1, | abuseHey, I think that its really good so far. Really interesting, and really well written...the only mistake I found was in the 3rd paragraph, last line. Its just the word minutes is spelled 'minuets'. No big. I look forward to reading more! BLESSED BE. |
| Austin 2004-12-02 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is the last review for i have read all of these already and have had a great joy in doing so. |
| Fairy Princess of the Field 2004-12-02 ch 1, | abuseI love this one! Its like a cliffy! I want to read more! Hurry up will you! Love,Captain Sarah |