Hi, I'm here with My Mind's Entity, and she loves your pen name! Yet back to the review, getting left somewhere is something that everyone fears, whether secretly or not. Creative theme, but you might want to work on how you describe the character. Try being subtle and don't introduce everything at once. It has great potential, so keep writing on and maybe put a little more detail about the setting.Great job!

Nice one!

I think this story has a lot of potential to be one gruesome tale.