|Reviews for Adoration|
| Patrick Vicens 3/21/05 . chapter 1
I don't say much to poems, and im not a religious guy, but I liked this poem because it shows your trust and belief in something.
| YK Author 2/6/05 . chapter 1
This is a very uplifting poem. Since you wrote that this is from a church retreat, I can only assume that you are taking about God or some other higher being. This in itself gives this poem the before mentioned uplifting work! _
| Lotus Bleu 12/19/04 . chapter 1
hm... it doesn't really seem like a poem. it doesn't really have much rhythm to it. it is good, though, just not really poetic.
could you R&R some of my work?
| Teperehmi 12/3/04 . chapter 1
That was beautiful and so very true! Nice work! Please R&R some of my things if you'd like!
| adeadaccount 12/1/04 . chapter 1
Very beautiful! Well done!
| Camman 11/30/04 . chapter 1
good. It is nice. Perhaps some better formatting though, makes it seem longer than it should be. Otherwise perfect.