well done, this chap. I enjoyed it. update soon.

Neatest thing in the world... sounds like something i'd do. You're basing this with reality, very good.~For people to read fiction, it has to be believable. For them to read non-fiction, it must be unbelievable.~Excellent litany on pain. ~Doesn't the potatoe actually mean something? Or is he really just nutz?

He speaks carefully, but well. I enjoy being thrown into this preciceness. ~You've got your typical grammatical errors, those are easy enough to alter.~You over describe everything, like you always do, but that's appropriate for this character.~You... thief! You have read Hitchikers guide! Or have you just seen it? ~Viruses...~That is the most beautiful ending line, like, ever.

I like Than. He distinctly reminds me of my brother. He also reminds me a bit of Zaphod Breeblebrox ( I think that's spelled right) from Hitchikers guide to the galaxy. If you haven't read it yet, I'll be glad to lend you my copy.~grins show teeth, smiles may or may not.~Sometimes venoms may cancel each other out, sometimes they can have wierd reactions together. I hope he knows what he's doing...~Rameses I can't quite read. He's.. an exacarbated wize guy with not much better to do.

One more and then back to work..lunch break...

You repeat yourself in this sentence, you need to remove one or the other mention of human from it to make it more smooth, "She and two human slaves, a juvenile male and adult female, both human."

Interesting a robot about to break away from programming...

Darwin

Alrighty then that answers that one, but do you really think that the AI will have access to information on somehting that will inhibit it? I would think that would be a poor thought process on the manufacturer to allow it to learn about imposed limitations.

Just me thinking now.

Huh? Did she kick him? I know we are only getting simple input here, but there should be something else to this unless there is some kind of other talent being used to damage or poor little AI.

m...Ok guess we know how she truly feels now... I am a bit confused on the ending here however.

She located the owner but what is going on? Is she asleep? This wasn't all that clear.

You really do have to feel sorry for Pryx. Though I'd be freakin' burning the robot by this point... I don't like where that foreshadowing is going...

This is a really wierd (wierd being a good thing) story. It's kinda like I, Robot but I like it more.

The life, the universe, and everything. Poor Pryx...

Sorry I've disappeared on you, but college has caught up with me this semester. I don't have time to write practically anything, much less read. And with everything I've missed, there's no way I'm going to be able to catch up with everything you've written.

I'd love to continue reading, but *sighs* college. If I ever find the time to catch up on some stuff, I'm going to do it. I really like your works. I just don't have the time to read them.

hm. well, i dunno 'bout rameses, but I kinda like Thanatos. update soon.

Than still rawks. ^^ He's awesomeful. Rameses is a cool guy (yeah, I know...) ... I think I may know why Than and Ryli're ar odds! -mad giggle-

*raises hand* *raises other hand* *raises hand of people next to me* :-)~ Rameses... sounds familiar..~Okay, I've reviewed now, you have three, when are you having a next chappie?~I really like this. I can't put my finger on why, but I do.~Thanatos seems to be a good little satanist. Does whatever happens to please him at the time, and whatever will give him the most enjoyment. Even if it includes helping, or murdering, others. ~M... Do do bird...~Syluna