hehehe. The last laugh is always the writer because the world in your head is always your and they can never see more than peices of it.

This is amazing, for a minute there i thought that you were talking about me. Its a great trait of a writer when a reader can identify with the work. And i certainly felt everybit of this. Well done -Keith Andrew

heh, i know perfectly well those feelings of deception and betrayal, even when the flamer is a stranger. you've really captured the essential emotions here, and the language and structure lends itself nicely to the context. good job (and u dont deserve any flames! ppl dont know good poetry!)