Reviews for Hallie's Comet
Dobedoo 10/24/08 . chapter 1
Cute. Great job, keep up the wonderful work dear.
aphroditeseyes 9/4/05 . chapter 1
aw...this is so cute. I think you've just put down every girl's thoughts and emotions when it comes to their crush.
DuchessYappingDog 6/13/05 . chapter 1
That's sweet. Sigh. But I don't get the last "i" at the end of the story. / Oh well. hahahahah.
Estelle 5/7/05 . chapter 1
That is the CUTEST story! I love it. It would be very cool made up into a series. :) -Estelle
CheesyBiscuits 3/26/05 . chapter 1
wow. this was pretty good. i think its safe to say that u accurately described how every grl feels wen it comes to her crush. u should expand on this idea. its seems lyk its worth reading.
flibbertigibbet 12/3/04 . chapter 1
great story.. you hooked me