Cute. Great job, keep up the wonderful work dear.

aw...this is so cute. I think you've just put down every girl's thoughts and emotions when it comes to their crush.

That's sweet. Sigh. But I don't get the last "i" at the end of the story. / Oh well. hahahahah.

That is the CUTEST story! I love it. It would be very cool made up into a series. :) -Estelle

wow. this was pretty good. i think its safe to say that u accurately described how every grl feels wen it comes to her crush. u should expand on this idea. its seems lyk its worth reading.

great story.. you hooked me