* It should be in fan fiction . net

If it's based on the little mermaid and the little mermaid's characters, shouldn't it be in instead of here?

You would get a lot more reviews.

Otherwise, this was interesting.
Different.

Love. It. No other way to put it. I just LOVE IT. I always hated the little mermaid (and everything else disney) I mean COME ON not everybody gets a happy ending! I mean please, the characters dont even learn the others name untill dfter they are together! So ys, I loved your story. It was funny, sad, original, sad, cool, and sad. Keep up the good work! I think you should do more like this.

I like your story. . . it could be even better if you would make it that way. I would really like for you too wirte differently too, the Rosa: " blah blah blah." And then the Prince: " blah blah blah" I cant follow when people write like that. I'm not trying to be rude, really. But if you would add more detail to the story and made more chapters for it explaining everything that went on it would really be a great story.

death-dealer

Hey. I noticed you had my story, Saving Grace, on your favorites list, but you'd never reviewed. (I'd like it if you would, by the way .. I love reviewers!) Anyway, this is a good piece. Nice work. Keep it up.

Wow, that is so sad. I liked it though. I wish you would expand it!