 softer side of apples 2007-12-03 . chapter 1I LOVE IT!! |
 Arafax 2007-10-08 . chapter 1This could really be a beautiful piece if you made it longer and really explored and expanded on what you have already written. Nice work overall though.
~Arafax~ |
 SecretAznJen 2005-01-28 . chapter 1I liked this. Short with open discussion to the meaning. Such a mysterious yet powerful feeling to it. Like looking into someone's eyes and knowing there is something behind there that you can't quite understand. M... mystery. I love it. :) |
 ColdFrost 2004-12-15 . chapter 1Short but very powerful.
The last line is perfect!
And extremly good poem |
 Saga Lhan 2004-12-02 . chapter 1I kind of like the short poems, because explaining your feelings accuratly in few phrases is true art. Very nice poem, it reminds me of some own experiences. |
 Dark-Poetess 2004-12-01 . chapter 1Its too short to get your point accross. Its like writing a story like "Once upon a time in a land far far away, the end" It barely gives you a mental image of the poem before it ends. |
 Manuel Fajar 2004-12-01 . chapter 1Thoughtful and well written poem. ¿Or will you laugh? Knowing you're still alive, and have a heart and soul to witness life. m |