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| softer side of apples 2007-12-03 ch 1,  | abuseI LOVE IT!! |
| Arafax 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abuseThis could really be a beautiful piece if you made it longer and really explored and expanded on what you have already written. Nice work overall though. ~Arafax~ |
| painted stars on blue sky e... 2005-01-28 ch 1, | abuseI liked this. Short with open discussion to the meaning. Such a mysterious yet powerful feeling to it. Like looking into someone's eyes and knowing there is something behind there that you can't quite understand. M... mystery. I love it. :) |
| ColdFrost 2004-12-15 ch 1, | abuseShort but very powerful. The last line is perfect! And extremly good poem |
| Saga Lhan 2004-12-02 ch 1, | abuseI kind of like the short poems, because explaining your feelings accuratly in few phrases is true art. Very nice poem, it reminds me of some own experiences. |
| Dark-Poetess 2004-12-01 ch 1, | abuseIts too short to get your point accross. Its like writing a story like "Once upon a time in a land far far away, the end" It barely gives you a mental image of the poem before it ends. |
| Manuel Fajar 2004-12-01 ch 1, | abuseThoughtful and well written poem. ¿Or will you laugh? Knowing you're still alive, and have a heart and soul to witness life. m |