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| Made in U.S.A. 2005-05-12 ch 1,   | this is almost lyrical in a way as it is truthfull and beautifully written. keep writing :D |
| Eve Martinez 2004-12-01 ch 1, | so very true... |
| negligible fictional force 2004-12-01 ch 1, | i like it.it's beautiful, with a tinge of sadness.how we don't quite rule our lives.i love it, actually.nice.-kismet. |
| Dark-Poetess 2004-12-01 ch 1, | Have more respect for your poetry! This is a wonderful piece. It kind of hits a tender spot for me, which makes me love it all the more. In a slight mental sense, i can understand this person. Its like you slit open a whole to the very soul that you're writing about. its moving. |