Reviews for Chasing Mussolini

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Georgianna 2008-08-08 ch 4,	abuseOh this is amazing! A SHEEP NAMED MUSSOLINI I LOVE YOU!
i read to procrastinate 2008-06-28 ch 4, anon.	abuse"my sheep likes you" hahaha your story is so original! OMG! SHOP RITE! and i thought it only existed in my small microscopic town. xD
insatiablehunger89 2008-06-15 ch 6,	abusethis is great. i love how their aren't already falling for each other, though you can see it coming, which makes it all the interesting.
Maxegirl1313 2008-05-03 ch 1,	abuseI love it!
puka.shells 2008-05-03 ch 9,	abuseOk. So far, I like the story, I think it's OK, but not like... spectacular or something. But I do appreciate the quirks here and there. I'm really tired of the A&F and Hollister speculations that just pops out every time. Ugh. Seriously, I think it's rather unnecessary, and quite shallow. No offense. Tessa, her character to me is kind of... eh. And there's also these mistakes that was in there like, "Isay," "Iargued," and so on. At first when I caught that it was OK with me, then it got distracting when there was too much. Sorry about my kind of rude review.
Pione 2008-04-30 ch 25,	abuseSequel? :)
Super.Maddy 2008-04-10 ch 25,	abuseHehe I loved this story! I read it while back but never got round to reviewing it. I hope you keep writing stories just as good. Good luck for you future stories. xx Maddy
S. Kila Laase 2008-03-31 ch 25,	abuseI read half of this story about two years ago, and it didn't occur to me until today that you'd finished it. Lovely job, dearie, I think the epilogue was most definitely my favorite part. You are amazing, hope to hear more from you soon! :D!
anneliese 2008-03-30 ch 25, anon.	abusei think you ended it beautifully. and i adored this line: "It is a Kiss with a capital letter in front of it, a kiss to end all kisses. There never was a kiss in the world before this one. He is saying things to me with his mouth, and without having to turn on my brain, I know what every single one of them is." just like an old movie. to have or have not, casablanca. for some reason i couldn't get bogart&bacall out of my head while reading this! thanks for sharing. (may want to change the story status to complete?)
Shake Hips Not Fists 2008-03-29 ch 25,	abuseWell I'm glad the chapter ended on a slightly good note but sad that she just abruptly walked away from Ian. :( But, I also really like how open and vague the ending is cause we can just imagine everything from there on. :) Awesome story. :D
xxUnidentified14xx 2008-03-28 ch 11,	abuseThat'd be so goddamn awsome!
Alenor 2008-03-26 ch 25,	abuseoh god, no! you can't just leave it like that. and there's no way she can leave poor ian like that, that's harsh. ahh well, cya later ~ Alenor.
Woodstock1330 2008-03-25 ch 25,	abuseGood God you finally finished it! Kudos! The ending was nice and anti-climactic btw, I lurved it!!
Oooh.Look.A Cat 2008-03-24 ch 25,	abusehmm it does leave it open for sequals but they break up?! oh that's so sad =( that sucks i liked it though sad but i hear a sequal haha izzie
Purity of Light 2008-03-24 ch 25,	abuseHey. I just read your full story. Today. Took me like 6 hours. Haha. There isn't much to pick at, your plot is great, and I loved the whole story. Just a lot of grammatical and spelling errors. Now that your finished, I advise you go back and edit these, to make it even better! Also, your ["] and ['] in the last few chapters have been either replaced by those square boxes or not there entirely. May want to fix that too, its confusing. But all in all, congratulations on a great story!!

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