i was so happy when tess and ian got together, and the way you fit the song in was amazing! i did like that they broke up though (i'm weird like that)..it kept the story heart wrenching realistic. and i loved that she still has her boys ^^ thank you so much for a wonderful story!

Well Hello! This was a fantasticastic story! Will you be writing a Sequel?!?! Because i have hopes for Bryan... :P! KEep writing

Sequel!! Pretty pretty please :)

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I think this story has a lot of potential.
I really don't like how you don't use
quotations to set off dialogue.
It bugged me to the point
where I just can't continue reading it.
Although I don't plan on finishing this story,
what I've read I like.

Please, plz do a sequel, switching off in Ian and Tess's POV

Wow... so I didn't see that coming. I loved your writing, and your characters, and everything about your story except for the end. I think I'm upset, because why would you base an entire story on two characters, and have such an amazing finale, and then break them up in the epilogue? I understand that this is your story, and you can do whatever you want with it, but it came out of nowhere. Anywho, I don't have an account here, but if you want to e-mail me, it's . I did really enjoy your story though - it was beautifully written.

Was told to read this by a friend, she said it would help (I'm sick at the moment and have had 3 weeks of school! Not good in year 12!) any way - it's taken almost 5 hours, but I finished it and I have to say that I am EXTREEMLY happy she recommended this! Your story was... I can't even think of a word to describe it! I laughed at Ian and the Pearls & Glory (have to say that I might have a bit of a thing for the band you created), Loved the music and your choice of Tess' bands (some of my favourites were in there!) and I cried so hard when everything went pear shaped for Tess. Haven’t checked yet to see if you’ve got a sequel planned, but I hoping that you do because you write really well and your story is just so good!

All I can say is thank you so so so much for writing this because it is now one of my favourite stories!

xx
Mel

Oh this is amazing!
A SHEEP NAMED MUSSOLINI
I LOVE YOU!

"my sheep likes you" hahaha
your story is so original!
OMG! SHOP RITE! and i thought it only existed in my small microscopic town. xD

this is great. i love how their aren't already falling for each other, though you can see it coming, which makes it all the interesting.

I love it!

Ok. So far, I like the story, I think it's OK, but not like... spectacular or something. But I do appreciate the quirks here and there.

I'm really tired of the A&F and Hollister speculations that just pops out every time. Ugh. Seriously, I think it's rather unnecessary, and quite shallow. No offense. Tessa, her character to me is kind of... eh.

And there's also these mistakes that was in there like, "Isay," "Iargued," and so on. At first when I caught that it was OK with me, then it got distracting when there was too much.

Sorry about my kind of rude review.

Sequel? :)

Hehe
I loved this story!
I read it while back but never
got round to reviewing it.
I hope you keep writing stories
just as good.
Good luck for you future stories.

xx Maddy