|Reviews for Chasing Mussolini|
| wasabi-angel 7/20/09 . chapter 25
Sequel! Pretty pretty please :)
| swords dragons and diet coke 5/27/09 . chapter 8
| Clazziquai Project 2/7/09 . chapter 10
I think this story has a lot of potential.
I really don't like how you don't use
quotations to set off dialogue.
It bugged me to the point
where I just can't continue reading it.
Although I don't plan on finishing this story,
what I've read I like.
| xInkMusique 11/28/08 . chapter 25
Please, plz do a sequel, switching off in Ian and Tess's POV
| summershine 9/14/08 . chapter 25
Wow... so I didn't see that coming. I loved your writing, and your characters, and everything about your story except for the end. I think I'm upset, because why would you base an entire story on two characters, and have such an amazing finale, and then break them up in the epilogue? I understand that this is your story, and you can do whatever you want with it, but it came out of nowhere. Anywho, I don't have an account here, but if you want to e-mail me, it's . I did really enjoy your story though - it was beautifully written.
| EdwardGirl11 9/13/08 . chapter 25
Was told to read this by a friend, she said it would help (I'm sick at the moment and have had 3 weeks of school! Not good in year 12!) any way - it's taken almost 5 hours, but I finished it and I have to say that I am EXTREEMLY happy she recommended this! Your story was... I can't even think of a word to describe it! I laughed at Ian and the Pearls & Glory (have to say that I might have a bit of a thing for the band you created), Loved the music and your choice of Tess' bands (some of my favourites were in there!) and I cried so hard when everything went pear shaped for Tess. Haven’t checked yet to see if you’ve got a sequel planned, but I hoping that you do because you write really well and your story is just so good!
All I can say is thank you so so so much for writing this because it is now one of my favourite stories!
| Georgianna 8/8/08 . chapter 4
Oh this is amazing!
A SHEEP NAMED MUSSOLINI
I LOVE YOU!
| i read to procrastinate 6/28/08 . chapter 4
"my sheep likes you" hahaha
your story is so original!
OMG! SHOP RITE! and i thought it only existed in my small microscopic town. xD
| insatiablehunger89 6/15/08 . chapter 6
this is great. i love how their aren't already falling for each other, though you can see it coming, which makes it all the interesting.
| Maxegirl1313 5/3/08 . chapter 1
I love it!
| puka.shells 5/3/08 . chapter 9
Ok. So far, I like the story, I think it's OK, but not like... spectacular or something. But I do appreciate the quirks here and there.
I'm really tired of the A&F and Hollister speculations that just pops out every time. Ugh. Seriously, I think it's rather unnecessary, and quite shallow. No offense. Tessa, her character to me is kind of... eh.
And there's also these mistakes that was in there like, "Isay," "Iargued," and so on. At first when I caught that it was OK with me, then it got distracting when there was too much.
Sorry about my kind of rude review.
| Pione 4/30/08 . chapter 25
| Super.Maddy 4/10/08 . chapter 25
I loved this story!
I read it while back but never
got round to reviewing it.
I hope you keep writing stories
just as good.
Good luck for you future stories.
| S. Kila Laase 3/31/08 . chapter 25
I read half of this story about two years ago, and it didn't occur to me until today that you'd finished it. Lovely job, dearie, I think the epilogue was most definitely my favorite part. You are amazing, hope to hear more from you soon! :D!
| anneliese 3/30/08 . chapter 25
i think you ended it beautifully.
and i adored this line:
"It is a Kiss with a capital letter in front of it, a kiss to end all kisses. There never was a kiss in the world before this one. He is saying things to me with his mouth, and without having to turn on my brain, I know what every single one of them is."
just like an old movie. to have or have not, casablanca. for some reason i couldn't get bogart&bacall out of my head while reading this!
thanks for sharing. (may want to change the story status to complete?)