*tear* that was so lovely FUFU. Can't wait for the next chapter IAN? lol

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Hey, this is a great story! Love the humor- especially in the 2nd chapter (I think) where Tess is denying inviting the sheep over for tea. Lol very funny, pleas update soon!

“He was raised on emo,” says Ian, with a completely straight face. “Something Corporate attracts him like a magnet attracts iron filings.”

That was the highlight of my day. And if you think I'm a loser, go right ahead. I'm still laughing on the inside.

So I

Hmm. I think I like it. Savior Boy seems a bit obsessed with his sheep, but it's cool. Really. Update quickly, plleeasse.

I'm glad you updated! That was great of Ian to save her again. I can't wait for the next update!

yea umm sis i think ur missin the rest of the story... but chap one was alrite and the end... well yea it was ok... i guess and yea u better be continuein the story otherwise id have to kill u or somethin terrible lol it was a good chap tho so dont take it badly love yaMike

hey sis yea i no i said id make my name wierd and all but o well so the prologue was a lil wierd but good u got my attention and made me interested to read the next chapter to find out wat happens and i think ull be a great writer one of these days love ya Mike

Wow...I loved that. That was so hilarious! Your title and summary totally brought me in. Great job on such a great hook-and for having the story to back it up.

Write more!

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I like your story so far, it has plenty of potential. I can't wait for the next update!

I think the first chapter is pretty good and I love your taste in music :)but the end was quite of confusingstupid suburbia, I could never survive in it.

the first chapter was fine. you just need to progress a bit more in the next chapters. so far so good.

not bad for a first chpater, let's see where this is going.

Your summary convinced me to check it out. It sounded interesting. Good job with the first chapter and I can't wait to see what will happen later on. I'll be checking it out.

Good beginning. Something Corporate rocks. And for a weird coincidence I was listening to I Woke Up in a Car as I read that. It is one my most favoritable songs. Write on.