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| the.pink.life 2006-06-23 ch 1,  | abuseThis has a very fantasy-like feel. Interesting. I'm not sure if I understand all the metaphors you're tossing out here, but that could be just because every word is so heavy that the entire poem is very dense. Keep writing! :) |
| Aimee Raven 2005-12-25 ch 1, | abuseGorgeous metaphore...you give love mythological roots, you make it some sort of creature, a mysterious semi-deity...brilliant! Mind you, I do not share your views on love I think...this is bittersweet, but full of hope in my opinion. Love, Mia |
| saccharine lust aerial 2005-10-04 ch 1, | abuseYou are a blessing in your own right. I love your work, because it lets me know how much I still have to learn about life...and sum and substance. thanks, and please please PLEASE keep writing. this is a beautiful illustration of what my love can be sometimes, and what it shouldn't be sometimes... i dunno, but it makes me think of someone special... |
| ginnyellen 2005-03-07 ch 1, | abusewoah... this is a really good poem, I liked it. You seem to write a lot, that's great! I also write every single day...but unfortunately not all of my material is material to publish. I'm looking forward for that though... It will be amazing to be a poet one day. Thanks a lot for your review, loved it! is the best review I have gotten so far ;) you're great! Ellen |
| catseyeview 2005-02-10 ch 1, | abuseThere is something of a feeling of the ancient, it is indeed the origins of the untamed heart and you rake the sands of this so well with your use of symbology. |
| Eirien 2005-01-12 ch 1, | abuseNicely done, I like the way you hint at so many things with your partly very erudite allusions, and leave a lot of space for the reader to interpret. |
| fRoZeN tIgEr TeArS 2004-12-29 ch 1, | abusewow. great poem! I esp like the first stanza!Thanks for the reviews! on your question about "Christian Lady" and what she did wrong:my point being that so many people can call themselves 'christian' and not truly be one living for God. They can go to the church and listen to their pastor, and all they hear are words, not feelings, not the beauty, grace and love of god...so they live their whole lives thinking they are doing 'everything right' when they haven't done it entirely right. They've never asked forgiveness, never considered their sins. Thanks againFTT |
| Siberia1 2004-12-06 ch 1, | abuseI think I'm running out of compliments to give to you. :) The metphor leaves me breathless, and the message you bring across makes my mind whirl with the many facets of love's elusiveness. I'm truly in awe of your vast talent. Two thumbs up! b^_^d |