Interesting...It's very cute.

ahh too cute! lol

Just too adorable. We are to old to understand that.

Okay... this was stunningly beautiful! I love the end especially! YAY! It's awesome, great job on this!

That's awesome! Dude, I love this poem, it's hilarious, and sweet, at the same time! WOOT! ...sorry, hyper moment. But seriously, this poem is so awesomely AWESOME! it is...AWESOME! *spaz from lack of better description* Sorry for being a little hyper spaz, but it's because i love this poem so much, it has supplied me with energy!

WOW! I really like that poem! Its soo good and interesting, and I like how you put it in a childs point of veiw..that last part, "Maybe they're too old to understand." That was amazing, I just loved it!!

hahahaahah. that's great :)