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| Syren of the Sky 2005-10-22 ch 1,  | abuseoh, such swift dancing words-the title caught my eye. and i have to say, i was not dissapointed. |
| flerix 2005-04-28 ch 1, | abuseYour poetry isAs usual, descriptive.Very nice work, yes. |
| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands 2005-02-20 ch 1, | abuseSimply stunning x weasel within x |
| somefreakylooknchick 2005-02-15 ch 1, | abusewhoa. you're like, good. I read reviews that you gave some peoples and I thought you were a totally weirdo. weirdo or not, your a great writer. |
| Andaren 2005-02-11 ch 1, | abuseGreat imagary here, Manuel :D as always, a fantastic piece of writing. Blessed Be, Andaren x |
| lucidorpheus 2005-01-25 ch 1, | abuseI really like this one. |
| Cyssel 2004-12-26 ch 1, | abusethis is wonderful, and the phrasing is excellent. i just like the way how you piece the words together. -winter |
| Sallie Beaver 2004-12-24 ch 1, | abuseWhat captivating descriptions of music, sir...It's truly clever how you combined them with tastes and pictures so uniquely. Though I haven't heard the string quartet, it's certainly lovely to picture...My favorite lines are the first two. ^_^ Thanks for such beautiful insight... -Sallie |
| Siberia1 2004-12-24 ch 1, | abuseWow! So gorgeous. I was once again swept off my feet reading your wondrous verses! I never encountered anyone describing sound like that before... |
| keltica 2004-12-02 ch 1, | abusewell that's saturated with imagery and vivid colours :p ... I like the lines at the centre of the poem in particular ... namariekeltica, the celtic fire from within |
| negligible fictional force 2004-12-01 ch 1, | abuseand the beautiful things in life can only be expressed in a beautiful poem as such. -kismet. |
| obsidian katana 2004-12-01 ch 1, | abuseawesome poem. i love your diction and the imagery is simply beautiful. wonderfully written, i like this piece a lot. nice conveying melodies as aromas and sights. great job! |
| linaeve 2004-12-01 ch 1, | abuseoh, wow. just lovely-- every line is infused with such tanalising sensory... brilliant. -lin |