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Reviews For: Shiraz Melody
Syren of the Sky 2005-10-22 . chapter 1
oh, such swift dancing words-the title caught my eye. and i have to say, i was not dissapointed.
flerix 2005-04-28 . chapter 1
Your poetry isAs usual, descriptive.Very nice work, yes.
Clap Clap Raise Your Hands 2005-02-20 . chapter 1
Simply stunning x weasel within x
somefreakylooknchick 2005-02-15 . chapter 1
whoa. you're like, good. I read reviews that you gave some peoples and I thought you were a totally weirdo. weirdo or not, your a great writer.
Andaren 2005-02-11 . chapter 1
Great imagary here, Manuel :D as always, a fantastic piece of writing.

Blessed Be,

Andaren x
T. T. Goldsmith 2005-01-25 . chapter 1
I really like this one.
Cyssel 2004-12-26 . chapter 1
this is wonderful, and the phrasing is excellent. i just like the way how you piece the words together. -winter
Sallie Beaver 2004-12-24 . chapter 1
What captivating descriptions of music, sir...It's truly clever how you combined them with tastes and pictures so uniquely. Though I haven't heard the string quartet, it's certainly lovely to picture...My favorite lines are the first two. ^_^

Thanks for such beautiful insight...

-Sallie
Siberia82 2004-12-24 . chapter 1
Wow! So gorgeous. I was once again swept off my feet reading your wondrous verses! I never encountered anyone describing sound like that before...
keltica 2004-12-02 . chapter 1
well that's saturated with imagery and vivid colours :p ... I like the lines at the centre of the poem in particular ...

namariekeltica, the celtic fire from within
negligible fictional force 2004-12-01 . chapter 1
and the beautiful things in life can only be expressed in a beautiful poem as such. -kismet.
obsidian katana 2004-12-01 . chapter 1
awesome poem. i love your diction and the imagery is simply beautiful. wonderfully written, i like this piece a lot. nice conveying melodies as aromas and sights. great job!
linaeve 2004-12-01 . chapter 1
oh, wow. just lovely-- every line is infused with such tanalising sensory... brilliant.

-lin
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