 Anjeni Windsinger 2004-12-04 . chapter 1"Powerful, well-written... awesome. You explain yourself well in this poem, and you speak simply, which is where the overall mood of the poem comes from, in my opinion. The ending, especially, is a prime example of that. A lot of great lines in here, my favourite being the last two in the fourth stanza. Your rhyming was great, flow was good... excellent work!"
There, now you have the review again ^_^ Anyway, love this as much as I loved it the first time I read it. I'll make it a point to come back to you in the future - you're a very interesting writer. |