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faerie princess00
2005-04-08
ch 1,
abuseouch...yeah that's it
layby-cougar
2004-12-02
ch 1,
abusewoah. *gapes in open mouthed shock* I liked this poem- maybe cos I'm dark inside, but it gripped me. But I would just like to say, that (hope I dont sound like I'm preaching) I also had a fight with my mum a few days ago- you probably think I have no idea what you're going through- and you're probably right. But still- things will get better. Your fight sounds quite serious, but try and take a step back and just let it go- you might end up feeling better. Remember not to let anyone bring you down too much- I'm sure you're a good person- (you're a good writer)- so don't let it bother you. :)Hope you feel better soon. Even though anger and sadness are good stimulants for writing, it's probably not worth going through pain to write a nice piece of work. Love,CarmenP.S. Hope I don't sound corny or intrustive- completely not my intention!
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